Great exercise. In the second photo I am drawn to the sheen on the arm of his leather jacket and the the position of his hand on the table, not unlike a pianonist's on the keys of a piano. What book is on the table? Is that a pipe in his hand behind his back? Is he watching a bird foraging in the snow below the window?
Of course there's the issue of that cathedrial in the background. He doesn't seem all that interested in it.
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